Storm

summer storm coming flashes of thunder, lightning get out of the pool
Written June 23, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:01 AM
"get out of the pool" - great ending!
Hankins Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Thanks, Caren.
Tor Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Great advice. I should take. I was painting outside last night, hoping it would not rain. Then the Lightning started. I wanted to continue but I also wanted to live another day, lol. Hope your making a good recovery from your surgery... Blessings...
Hankins Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Doing well, thank you, Michael.
Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 6:28 PM
-- and off of the golf course! (Dja ever see 'Groundhog Day?!' How 'bout that golf course scene with the lightning? Pretty funny, methinks).
Hankins Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Indeed, gw.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Your few words tells the story. I love the summer storms. It cools everything down. Have a blessed day...........
Hankins Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Me too, Paula. I remember being called out of the pool when a sudden storm would come up. You have a marvelous day, too.
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