Storm

summer storm coming flashes of thunder, lightning get out of the pool Written June 23, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2022 3:01:00 AM

"get out of the pool" - great ending!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/3/2022 8:26:00 AM

Thanks, Caren.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/23/2022 10:01:00 PM

Great advice. I should take. I was painting outside last night, hoping it would not rain. Then the Lightning started. I wanted to continue but I also wanted to live another day, lol. Hope your making a good recovery from your surgery... Blessings...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/24/2022 11:10:00 AM

Doing well, thank you, Michael.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/23/2022 6:28:00 PM

-- and off of the golf course! (Dja ever see 'Groundhog Day?!' How 'bout that golf course scene with the lightning? Pretty funny, methinks).

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/24/2022 11:10:00 AM

Indeed, gw.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/23/2022 8:42:00 AM

Your few words tells the story. I love the summer storms. It cools everything down. Have a blessed day...........

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/23/2022 9:36:00 AM

Me too, Paula. I remember being called out of the pool when a sudden storm would come up. You have a marvelous day, too.