Stopping Me In My Tracks

I just stopped in my tracks hearing those beautiful verses soft, sweet, and a little bit sultry What she called broken English drew me near and ripped my heart to pieces. I came closer and saw staring... those rich chestnut eyes roasting on a fire deep inside the smell of lavender fragranced the air from that flowing fauna hair floating me through fields of wildflowers... Bright yellow and white daisies sang out to me surrounded by bold blue Pimpernel and purple prairie clover.. my mind was drifting away Then you noticed me and smiled a big how are you smile stopping me again in my tracks It was then and it was there I knew there was no turning back I knew my love I've found, in you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Vaso Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 11:54 PM
Beautiful Tim, last time I was stopped in my tracks was a sniper rifle, kinda makes me think of a poem! LOL ..... soon
A   Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 3:54 PM
lovely write, enjoyed:) Luv p.d.
Eastman Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 11:33 AM
LOVED the romance... Especially how it started... Sigh!... Hey! Dragon! Quit hitting me... Yeah... I'll wake up and run with you.... But couldn't you wait till I got my Tim fix for the day?... Oh Yeah! He's a Dragon... forgot! LOL...
Ellison Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:52 AM
You are a real charmer Mr. Tim! You must have to fight off the ladies... lucky guy! YEEHAW!!!
Nunez Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Romantic Poet of the Decade, Tim. Lovely thoughts for your loved one.
Y. Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Tim, this is such a beautiful story. Its so romantic. Excellent job)Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Terrific romantic piece Tim.
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Thanks Richard
Trifiatis Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Charming and delightfully tender to the heart!
Trifiatis Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 5:48 PM
I have for itdoes it for 5000 years!
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 8:47 PM
Thank you Demetrios...Greece will rise again...have faith
Chircop Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 3:37 PM
: )..This beauty puts a smile on my face..When one can see beauty even in the flaws of a person..it make him. sound like love all over. .How I love daises and the way they sway as one utters their name.Exceptional ! A fav !
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Daisies are beautiful....there is beauty all around us, we just need to look...thank you Charmu....hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 3:15 PM
simply delightful Tim:-) hugs Jan xx7
Allison Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 3:32 PM
the antibiotics are kicking in so i am on the up:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 3:20 PM
Thanks Jan...hope you are feeling better...Tim
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