Stopping By the Woods On a Windy Evening

so this is my plea
Ive written this poem
for all to see-
i just lost my comb
I'm throwing this out there
So i can read 
the poems that you share
So please dont plead
For other poems 
if i were a boy id be mark sneed-
this humor-it roams
so look for my comment 
at the end of of your poem
it wont look like vomit
just something from home...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kershaw Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 7:23 PM
Willow, Nice Name. Nice Write. How did you know I was a sailor? Thanx for the comment. Best, Will
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 5:26 PM
Welcome to the Soup. Vince
Dray Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 3:31 PM
'the way i write is familiar' what do you mean by that? do you think im fat or something?
Goff Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 2:30 PM
woo-hoo-too!!!! love the freedom of your whimsy-filled poem!! jim
Dray Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 6:37 PM
woo-hoo this is insanely wonderful! its like a window into everyones soul keep it up!
Guzzi Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 11:58 AM
goodness!..good punny verse! Light & Love
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