Stop,But Let Go

 
the day you left me ,I stood right there. an empty soul ,tearing inside my head those dark bold eyes , edges that rised just like a call what stabbed my twice my cries were a vision of me dangling, hanging from a silver thread i just hoped she could have left , deep inside were the scars that left empty , alone , i believe limb to limb , i scatter to find my lost heart just the one hit by a millions of darts the tragedy of all was that i knew i deserved a darker kohl that was much more bold i died a little more day by day in the undershines of my gold i bleed , cry , die like each night was a slowmotion suicide a glance of you walking through that door made me realize that i could see you no more
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Agustin Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 8:44 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Somadas Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 2:48 AM
Broken hearts are difficult to stitch..Nice one..
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December 30, 2019 at 2:32 AM
Good one kiddo! You got some feeling in it! *CLAPS*
Krutsinger Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Being left behind is not easy. Welcome to Soup! We would be interested in seeing more of your poems.
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