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Stop,But Let Go

the day you left me ,I stood right there. an empty soul ,tearing inside my head those dark bold eyes , edges that rised just like a call what stabbed my twice my cries were a vision of me dangling, hanging from a silver thread i just hoped she could have left , deep inside were the scars that left empty , alone , i believe limb to limb , i scatter to find my lost heart just the one hit by a millions of darts the tragedy of all was that i knew i deserved a darker kohl that was much more bold i died a little more day by day in the undershines of my gold i bleed , cry , die like each night was a slowmotion suicide a glance of you walking through that door made me realize that i could see you no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/4/2020 2:48:00 AM
Broken hearts are difficult to stitch..Nice one..
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Date: 12/30/2019 2:32:00 AM
Good one kiddo! You got some feeling in it! *CLAPS*
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Date: 11/5/2019 8:29:00 PM
Being left behind is not easy. Welcome to Soup! We would be interested in seeing more of your poems.
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