Stop Whining
I've never seen a silver lining
emerge from a dark cloud
All I've heard was constant whining
turn into rage in voice too loud
Your flaws need adjusting and refining
Stop acting so damned proud
A little polish will have you shining
so you'll stand out in a crowd
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