Stop Our Violence

Somewhere we've made a mistake 
teaching children right from wrong
the poor choices that we make 
whilst making our children strong

We all have good intentions
from the moment that we start
but kids face some distractions
hiding what's deep within their hearts

The sex, drugs, and rock and roll
have turned to thoughts of violence
we need to have a new goal
and teach them some tolerance

Some factors that we should blame
movies, media, and us
all of which should feel some shame
but we don't          that's not a plus

What in God's name will it take
before we will understand
our precious lives are at stake
the outcome cannot be planned

We must stop kids from killing
I don't know who              even how
but we ALL must be willing 
to do this and do it now!


Written almost twenty years ago, after an area school shooting. Does it still hold any weight?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/21/2018 3:42:00 PM
Spoken loud and clear with a pen...I certainly think it holds weight; even more so today... If we don't find a way... Well... God help us.
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Date: 5/1/2017 12:10:00 PM
I think this is insightful and yes, it still holds weight ......... sad, but true.
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Date: 12/21/2016 10:03:00 PM
Yes, Keith, it certainly holds weight. On one hand, things are rough now. On the other, it's almost always the case that older generations look upon the younger with dismay.
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Date: 10/31/2016 4:47:00 AM
As the experience of being a current highschool student in this generation, this piece of work hold lots of truth to it, sadly. Well done.
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Date: 10/29/2016 11:24:00 AM
Yes, that is very important message Keith. Well done!
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Keith Osborne
Date: 10/29/2016 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I just discovered it recently. I think my writing has improved since then. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, I appreciate that.
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