Stop, Look, Listen, Smile

I can’t bear that rock in my shoe, As I sit, I glance up mesmerized by the sunset’s view. Seven deep in a grocery line, The wonderful innocent stare of a baby and mine align. Two minutes ‘til the microwave dings. I’m lifted on wings while the voice above nostalgically sings. Dropping my change all over the ground, It’s a wonder these tiny ants can amass such a mound. Traffic slowed to a halted gridlock, Listen to the honks leading that swaying vee of a flock. Keys locked inside my car, The horizon is so clear today, I can see so far. Coffee dripped upon my shirt, I’ll go in and change giving my darling a romantic flirt. My dog drops a load on their lawn, To their magnificent flower garden my eyes are drawn, Drive thru with limited crew, I don’t think I’ve ever seen that particular sunrise hue. If only I could stop on my own accord, I would readily see creation’s beauty gifted from my Lord.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Barden Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Gorgeous write, Micael - nicely done! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
Vacek Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:56 PM
Thank you Gregory...I definitely appreciate the blessings.
La France Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Michael, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful write!
Vacek Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:40 AM
Thank you, I was honored to even be considered.
Lindley Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:38 PM
This is fine flowing rhyme- much akin to fine flowing wine! Do not stop-- write more, this your readers shall implore. A ray of color for hearts left blue, sweet rhymes dancing two by two.. A fav.. thanks..
Vacek Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Thank you Robert. I absolutely love writing. I really enjoy sharing.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Aha! I thought I smelled bubblegum! Awesome :) I live my life that way. This is a delightful write and I am delighted to have a part in it. Bless! xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Oooh! Gotta find that poem! :)
Vacek Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 1:45 PM
I've paraphrased a line in David Whyte's poem and shared it with many:. "Attention is the discipline of familiarity..." You certainly do smell bubble gum.
Roper Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Michael, love the flow to your poem, a wonderful write of your steps of the day. Eve ~`*
Vacek Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Eve. Maureen's "A Century to Immortality" sparked the musing of this poem. Too often we are stopped for a moment out of our control and given a moment to recognize beauty...what if we stopped more often out of choice?
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace