Stop Holes In Dykes
Stop Holes in Dykes
Poem will jot down and quickly scribble
And at your imagination, it will nibble
As if a frantic fish searching for bait
Swimming then taking time to hesitate.
Finally fish would come to a complete stop
And into his mouth a tasty poem will pop
May be thought of as a trifle or eyeful
Of an experience proving to be delightful.
My poems do not mean much compared to yours
And if not in right mind people often bores
But after looking at you and all of your likes
Can use my poems to patch up holes in dykes.
Guess you could consider this as part of constructive
criticism with great wisdom of future poems to come.
James Thomas Horn
Retired Veteran
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