Damian Keady Poet Free verse

Stop and Stare

Stop and Stare – Enjoy the View

I saw you there
You stopped and stared
But what was I doing there?

You saw me there
I stopped and stared
But what was you doing there?

We stopped and stared
What were we both doing there?
As we both just stopped and stared

It’s like we both do really care
As otherwise why do we stop and stare?
I think I know now what to do

Just stop and stare at the view 
In the hope it maybe you

DAMO x

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Damian Keady January 25, 2020 at 7:47 PM I had forgotten I had written this... doh.. But it resonated for me then and now and hopefully in the future as I hopefully stop and stare.. Thankyou both for your looks and kind comments... DAMO x

Elaine Perrin October 17, 2019 at 7:25 AM Lovely :-) x

Panagiota Romios October 17, 2019 at 5:00 AM DAMO you brought back a really cool memory to me. That was the start of of fun and loving relationship... It went on for ten years and it ended up saving my life... Wow, thanks DAMO PR xx