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Somebody Stop the world What have you done to me? To make me feel Emotion Emotion I was a misanthropist before A robotic lack of interest And a hand stuck inside the snare Wire mouth of a mouse-trap smiling The racing mind whirling into obscurity Fine white mist and a filthy ceiling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/27/2009 9:23:00 PM
This is a really good poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. You really did a good job on this one, its really good. Nice work
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:27:00 PM
magnifecent.
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Date: 6/4/2009 9:40:00 PM
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I love the entire poem... but the last four lines are simply amazing. Thank you so much for reading, and for your comments. Keep writing, you have an awesome talent.
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Date: 6/4/2009 9:24:00 PM
Awesome imageries ... bravo
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Date: 6/4/2009 8:16:00 PM
wow, those were pretty intriguing sentences my friend @.@ quite peculiar description, specialy the last lines; thanks for the experience =D=D
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