Stop

Somebody
Stop the world
What have you done to me?
To make me feel 
Emotion
Emotion
I was a misanthropist before
A robotic lack of interest
And a hand stuck inside the snare
Wire mouth of a mouse-trap smiling
The racing mind whirling into obscurity
Fine white mist and a filthy ceiling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

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July 27, 2009 at 9:23 PM
This is a really good poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. You really did a good job on this one, its really good. Nice work
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June 6, 2009 at 7:27 PM
magnifecent.
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June 4, 2009 at 9:40 PM
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I love the entire poem... but the last four lines are simply amazing. Thank you so much for reading, and for your comments. Keep writing, you have an awesome talent.
Shango Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 9:24 PM
Awesome imageries ... bravo
Cantu Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 8:16 PM
wow, those were pretty intriguing sentences my friend @.@ quite peculiar description, specialy the last lines; thanks for the experience =D=D
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