Debbie Guzzi Poet Lanterne

Stop

Stop
        listen
    machine hum
   traffic roar on
        stop.

       Stop 
      quiet
   meow song
 wild cat calling
      stop.

       Stop
     silence
   silk rain fall
  tinkling chiming
      stop.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Matthew Anish March 5, 2009 at 10:44 AM Nice work - but what are we stopping here? Interesting form Matthew Anish

Frank F. Atanacio March 5, 2009 at 5:17 AM very clever write

Brian Strand March 4, 2009 at 11:55 PM Like the kyrielle flavour to this lanterne Debbie.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings/blog

Robin L. Gass March 4, 2009 at 9:49 PM Awesome lanterne, Debbie! Absolutely wonderful imagery. i love just listening to the world around me! Awesome piece, my dear friend! Love, Robin