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Stop listen machine hum traffic roar on stop. Stop quiet meow song wild cat calling stop. Stop silence silk rain fall tinkling chiming stop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/5/2009 10:44:00 AM
Nice work - but what are we stopping here? Interesting form Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/5/2009 5:17:00 AM
very clever write
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Date: 3/4/2009 11:55:00 PM
Like the kyrielle flavour to this lanterne Debbie.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings/blog
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Date: 3/4/2009 9:49:00 PM
Awesome lanterne, Debbie! Absolutely wonderful imagery. i love just listening to the world around me! Awesome piece, my dear friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/4/2009 2:55:00 PM
I was right there with you on your drive, loved this, always, Christy
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