Stood Up

STOOD     UP


Wet corner,  bricks uneven,
Rain driven in lines horizontal,
Cutting knife-edge of gale. 
Distant bell chimes eleven.


Turn up  coat  collarband:
Imagine why she’s late
For this our regular date;
Light cigarette with cupped hand.


She does not come,  likely never will.
Clock pointers slow to stop,
Bolts go home in door of tobacco shop, 
Last bus strains past up the hill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 1:48 PM
How sad, Syd, a genuinely moving poem. The last verse is particularly powerful! Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 7:40 AM
i enjoyed this creative poem you wrote, very moving.
Smith Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Wonderful as always Sydney. Looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
Onclaud Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 12:09 PM
awwh, what a date, syd... love the telegrahic lines so well defined in content and tonality... okay, mostly your stuff except for the last two ( joke).... splendid! soup mail in a while !:) hugggs, nette
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