Stones

Stones_
a fondation 
a strength 
to carry everything
pronounced on its shoulders
so tall
_thick
and it never falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations, Ashley on your win with this wonderful take on stones-- enjoyed reading this and also just want to help-- there's a missing "u" in foundation-- Congrats again :)
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June 15, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Excellent and quite profound, Ashley. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Stones" contest Ashley. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 6:52 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of rick, Ashley
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June 14, 2011 at 8:50 PM
Congrats Ashley on your super win in the Stones contest with another perfect write luv..
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