Stones

Big stones, rig stones Calling out to dig stones Round stones, pound stones Sitting on the ground stones Small stones, wall stones Make you trip and fall stones Grey stones, play stones Lying in the way stones Black stones, stack stones Ready for attack stones Bright stones, white stones Feeling very light stones Red stones, headstones Under your feet tread stones Two stones, blue stones Teaching how to hew stones Limestones, slime stones Weathering all time stones Sandstones, grand stones Spread out on the land stones Brownstones, crown stones You can break them down stones Bloodstones, stud stones Flowing with the flood stones Brimstones, gemstones, Shining diadem stones Rough stones, tough stones There are not enough stones Grindstones, lined stones Everywhere you find stones 08.10.2021 NA in "Stones" contest judged on 08.14.2021 For Constance La France's "August 2021 NA's" contest

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Constance La France

Date: 9/2/2021 1:56:00 PM

Jo, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/30/2021 9:06:00 AM

Everywhere you find stones Is the truth. Great work. Congratulations!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/16/2021 9:31:00 AM

If this is a marmite, sign me up. It has a dancy-prancy feeling as I read it.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/12/2021 8:08:00 PM

Love it, and you seemed to have built yourself a nice pillar with them at the same time, very creative and worded poem, as I went down I really couldn't wait to read the next line, an addictive write . . . ; )

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/11/2021 5:06:00 AM

They say Jo, a rolling stone gathers no moss, and your poem here, is a premium example, wonderful flow throughout quite lyrical actually, all the best in contest, cheers David

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/10/2021 6:32:00 PM

Jo, this is SO creative. WOW! Janice

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/10/2021 4:22:00 PM

You have created a cornucopia , a feast for the eyes, my eyes feel like two round stones right now, and all thanks to you. I love it. Jo

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/10/2021 11:34:00 AM

You have captured the essence of of something we don't often think about-yet what would we do without? This is so beautiful and well written. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn :)

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 8/10/2021 11:17:00 AM

Wow this is a strong contender... Love it!! So glad you enjoyed the challenge for the contest. This is brilliant and clever and full of good rhythm. :D

Joseph May

Date: 8/10/2021 9:51:00 AM

Well crafted Jo, best wishes

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/10/2021 9:38:00 AM

Very nicely done, Jo, good luck with the contest

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/10/2021 9:30:00 AM

Outstanding write, Jo. I found this contest most interesting, too, and wound up writing three "lists" before submitting one. Your rhymes are superb. I had trouble rhyming it.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2021 9:02:00 AM

Great list , Jo, wonderful entry for the contest . Eve

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/10/2021 8:19:00 AM

Very creative Jo, Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/10/2021 5:37:00 AM

Cleverly done, Jo. Enjoyed this ode to stones.

Charles Messina

Date: 8/10/2021 3:26:00 AM

Fabulous, Jo. This is so well done...You'd have to be stoned not to like this (lol) Reads like a contender...best wishes in the contest... Love it! Charlie

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/10/2021 3:02:00 AM

Very interesting poem. One can build a large building with them. Hugs and thanks for always being the first to comment on my poem.