Isaiah Zerbst Poet Terzanelle

Stonehenge

See shadows gently turning
Through countless nights and ceaseless days
Till once again returning

A blue and grey concentric maze
Enduring through the ages
Through countless nights and ceaseless days

Those now forgotten sages
Envisioned stones that still live on
Enduring through the ages

Though nations came, and now are gone
The men who stopped and pondered
Envisioned stones that still live on

Now only time has honoured
The days and seasons marked in time
The men who stopped and pondered

The moon and sun these sarcens climb
See shadows gently turning
The days and seasons marked in time
Till once again returning

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Donna Jones May 2, 2013 at 4:34 PM Congratulations Isaiah

Sara Kendrick May 2, 2013 at 3:42 PM I really like this one..Great thoughtful work that you have penned in this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Heather Ober April 29, 2013 at 9:17 AM Congrats, Isaiah :) Very well deserved win!

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2013 at 9:30 PM Isaiah, thank you for the wonderful poem and stunning imagery in my "7 wonders of the world contest." CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for the support. Take Care & Good Night ;-) ~LINDA

Jeremy Martin April 26, 2013 at 8:26 PM Lovely, artistic images and beautiful rhyming. Congratulations

Skat A April 26, 2013 at 8:18 PM Isaiah, congrats with your 7 wonder poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT

Sheri Fresonke Harper April 26, 2013 at 6:56 PM Wonderful poem Isaiah, truly captures Stonehenge, congratulaions

Donna Jones April 26, 2013 at 12:48 PM Awesome Isaiah...congratulations

Abdulhafeez Oyewole April 26, 2013 at 4:50 AM Congrats on your deserving win~A.O

Richard D Seal April 15, 2013 at 4:39 PM WOW. I love this. Have been there. passed it many times also whilst in the back of a truck, is a certain place as you move along that it appears to rise out of the ground, absolutely awesome. Thanks for this memory Isaiah. Great write. Take care, Richard

Charmaine Chircop April 3, 2013 at 9:06 AM I visited stonehenge..It was an outstanding experience..This poem describes the enchantment in shadows greatly.You manage to write about any topic.By the way if you ever visit stonehenge..fly 3hrs awsy to my island and visit the Neolitic temples..even older than stonehenge..deal!!:-$ B-)

Charmaine Chircop April 3, 2013 at 9:04 AM I visited stonehenge..It was an outstanding experience..This poem describes the enchantment in shadows greatly.You manage to write about any topic.By the way if you ever visit stonehenge..fly 3hrs awsy to my island and visit the Neolitic temples..even older than stonehenge..deal!!:-$ B-)

Carrie Richards April 2, 2013 at 6:33 PM It is an amazing and mysterious place. I love your spin on this one!! Nicely done, Isaiah!

Heather Ober April 2, 2013 at 11:07 AM AWESOME! I was lucky enough to visit Stonehenge last year and you have captured its magic and mystery perfectly. Terzanelle is one of my fave forms and you nailed it.