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Stoned Love

She likes to get high it heightens her affections soon we will fly just below Orion's belt sailing off the evening breeze... Awaiting your lips to steal my soul your tongue or a love stoned kiss soothing this moonlight drifter tonight it is raspy cool and the stars are out flickering on a steel blue horizon... After nights of smoke and wine shadows yield to spots of sunshine we awaken to rooster-crowing sunrise the blue birds singing through atoms of air sitting upon a morning cloud... ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/19/2014 7:50:00 PM
You give beauty to good moments. You got a genuine style Ken. J.A.B.
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Date: 4/17/2014 10:37:00 PM
Kudos Again
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/17/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thank you Tamara!
Date: 4/13/2014 12:02:00 PM
hey, wasn't this a song title at one time? I really like it. I had thought it was gonna be one of those ten word poems from the title I saw!!
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Date: 4/13/2014 12:06:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Yes I believe the Supremes had a song out in the 60's with the same title..I thought it appropriate for this write..Thanks for visiting..I'm a fan of old Motown tunes..
Date: 4/12/2014 5:31:00 PM
Romantic brilliance in this piece, Ken. Amazing imagery, with pure honesty of that special moment with your other half. Great piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/12/2014 5:36:00 PM
Hi Jiril, Thank you and I will stop by your page.. Ken
Date: 4/12/2014 5:29:00 PM
It sounds like you flew so high that you are still on cloud nine, maybe even cloud 10!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/12/2014 5:35:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Richard..It was an euphoric experience...lol
Date: 4/10/2014 6:22:00 PM
Ken, well done... Enjoyed this poem... Verlena
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/11/2014 11:21:00 AM
Thank you Verlena!

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