Stone Ring

Majestic stones stood in a ring
while birds flew by on the wing
this once was a place of kings
who spent their time battling

Their foes were now for beheading
this fate was cruel but befitting
a warning for others come warring
with every intention of acquiring

War horses swift of feet cantering
plunging with battle lust capering
the knights so proud are gathering
the stone ring they are honouring

Through the ages cults made offering
changing as they grew in culturing
yet never the stones change appearing
mystical, powerful capable of conjuring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/12/2013 3:03:00 PM
Touches the heart of the age of chivalry. Ladies in lace and men in armor exhibited the extreme limits of society in this age. Well done!! I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks for your visits and comments.... Love ya..... Jake
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/14/2013 8:40:00 AM
hi Jake and Ty dear for your lovely review Shadow x smile
Date: 10/10/2013 9:16:00 AM
Excellent poem with excellent image my dear friend Shadow. It also reminds me of the movie, Lord of the Rings. Kudos to you on this outstanding poem! thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by on one of my works. Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 4:48:00 PM
Hi Leonora enjoyed visiting your work +) Ty for your high praise hugs Shadow x smile
Date: 10/10/2013 8:24:00 AM
I love the mystical mood you have created reminiscent of Lord of The Rings. One of my favorite movies of all times. I enjoyed your poem Shadow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 4:46:00 PM
hi Richard and Ty for your lovely remarks hugs Shadow x smile
Date: 10/9/2013 10:14:00 AM
Majestic is certainly a good word for this writing. Color me impressed. I love the atmosphere you created here.
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Date: 10/10/2013 7:26:00 AM
hi Drake hope all is well ty for such a nice review Shadow x smile
Date: 10/9/2013 5:48:00 AM
wow, Shadow,, this is so good,, excellent poetry, and just love the imagery...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 7:27:00 AM
hi harry ty I am so happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smile
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