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Stone Ring

Majestic stones stood in a ring while birds flew by on the wing this once was a place of kings who spent their time battling Their foes were now for beheading this fate was cruel but befitting a warning for others come warring with every intention of acquiring War horses swift of feet cantering plunging with battle lust capering the knights so proud are gathering the stone ring they are honouring Through the ages cults made offering changing as they grew in culturing yet never the stones change appearing mystical, powerful capable of conjuring

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John Posey

Date: 10/12/2013 3:03:00 PM

Touches the heart of the age of chivalry. Ladies in lace and men in armor exhibited the extreme limits of society in this age. Well done!! I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks for your visits and comments.... Love ya..... Jake

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/14/2013 8:40:00 AM

hi Jake and Ty dear for your lovely review Shadow x smile

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2013 9:16:00 AM

Excellent poem with excellent image my dear friend Shadow. It also reminds me of the movie, Lord of the Rings. Kudos to you on this outstanding poem! thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by on one of my works. Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 4:48:00 PM

Hi Leonora enjoyed visiting your work +) Ty for your high praise hugs Shadow x smile

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/10/2013 8:24:00 AM

I love the mystical mood you have created reminiscent of Lord of The Rings. One of my favorite movies of all times. I enjoyed your poem Shadow.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 4:46:00 PM

hi Richard and Ty for your lovely remarks hugs Shadow x smile

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/9/2013 10:14:00 AM

Majestic is certainly a good word for this writing. Color me impressed. I love the atmosphere you created here.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 7:26:00 AM

hi Drake hope all is well ty for such a nice review Shadow x smile

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/9/2013 5:48:00 AM

wow, Shadow,, this is so good,, excellent poetry, and just love the imagery...

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2013 7:27:00 AM

hi harry ty I am so happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smile