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Stone In David's Sling

Stone in David’s sling:
One of five chosen, the one
That killed Goliath.

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Judy Ball

July 30, 2011 at 6:27 PM

That's what we need right now.David with a stone in his sling to kill our giant for us. Good write my friend. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 29, 2011 at 2:45 PM

Perfect one Jack.. who can ever forget that Bible victory luv... and this will bring victory to u am sure luv...good luck..amazing as always luv..

Phyllis Babcock

July 29, 2011 at 10:33 AM

Awesome write with a biblical figure included. God Bless Phyl

Caryl Ramsdale

July 28, 2011 at 4:02 PM

Jack: I love the biblical character references and stories written in poetic works. Great job my friend! Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

July 28, 2011 at 2:41 PM

Awesome poem, Jack. Would have made a great entry for the "Goliath Grouper" contest. LOL Yes, I always loved the way the underdog David beat the giant Goliath. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

July 28, 2011 at 10:39 AM

Great retelling of the "Bible" story in so few words..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Wilma Neels

July 28, 2011 at 8:49 AM

Awesome write Jack :-) lfde Wilma

Cory Long

July 28, 2011 at 6:46 AM

nicely said.. cory

Kash Poet

July 28, 2011 at 6:22 AM

Nice Haiku here...best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2011 at 10:35 PM

Just kidding down here with ya. As stones go, I think there could be no worthier destiny for a stone!

Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2011 at 10:33 PM

wow, VERY good thinking, jack. So are you a violent man? haha.

Jl Sadberry

July 27, 2011 at 8:03 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Well, Twas By `The Hand of Almighty God,` That David Slew goliath &, `His Majesty` Shall, Do It Again If & When Need Be But, `His Glory,` Will Need Just One Last Stone, My Man = Kool Poe.” === My Love to You & Yours, Jasper *