Stone In David's Sling

Stone in David’s sling:
One of five chosen, the one
That killed Goliath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/30/2011 6:27:00 PM
That's what we need right now.David with a stone in his sling to kill our giant for us. Good write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/29/2011 2:45:00 PM
Perfect one Jack.. who can ever forget that Bible victory luv... and this will bring victory to u am sure luv...good luck..amazing as always luv..
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Date: 7/29/2011 10:33:00 AM
Awesome write with a biblical figure included. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/28/2011 4:02:00 PM
Jack: I love the biblical character references and stories written in poetic works. Great job my friend! Caryl
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Date: 7/28/2011 2:41:00 PM
Awesome poem, Jack. Would have made a great entry for the "Goliath Grouper" contest. LOL Yes, I always loved the way the underdog David beat the giant Goliath. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:39:00 AM
Great retelling of the "Bible" story in so few words..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2011 8:49:00 AM
Awesome write Jack :-) lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:46:00 AM
nicely said.. cory
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:22:00 AM
Nice Haiku here...best wishes.
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:35:00 PM
Just kidding down here with ya. As stones go, I think there could be no worthier destiny for a stone!
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:33:00 PM
wow, VERY good thinking, jack. So are you a violent man? haha.
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:03:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Well, Twas By `The Hand of Almighty God,` That David Slew goliath &, `His Majesty` Shall, Do It Again If & When Need Be But, `His Glory,` Will Need Just One Last Stone, My Man = Kool Poe.” === My Love to You & Yours, Jasper *
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Date: 7/27/2011 5:47:00 PM
I love poetry that uses any kind of history this is Fabulous! Sharing this tale in 3 small lines!
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Date: 7/27/2011 5:45:00 PM
It just takes one. One stone, one story, one myth. Nice Haiku Jack :)
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