Stone In a Stream

 may my mere presence in place make a minor ripple - at peace I'd rest 

February 14, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Turner Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 7:26 PM
This one is amazing, Maggie. Pretty profound! you have a gentle soul:)
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:19 PM
back with my congrats on your very worthy win.
Lillico  Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 4:20 PM
Thank you, just sent you soup mail:)
Peck Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 2:21 PM
Your monoku is lovely and thoughtful. Congratulations!
Lillico  Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 4:50 PM
Thank you!
Alex Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 10:06 PM
Such a beautiful and very meaningful monoku that talks volumes. Congratulations!
Lillico  Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 4:50 PM
Thank you!
Agustin Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 7:46 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Lillico  Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 4:50 PM
Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a great day/weekend............
Lillico  Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 4:50 PM
Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:20 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest -
Lillico  Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Thank you!
Kauffman Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your win Margarita. So much poignant depth. Blessings.
Lillico  Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 5:30 PM
that is awesome.
Lillico  Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 2:40 AM
... it gives nice ripples :) - GL in the contest -
Lillico  Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Thank you!
Gondolf Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 12:38 PM
You do make a ripple, Maggie, whether you know it or not. I always notice your ripples. Hugs.
Lillico  Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 5:48 PM
:) thank you John, counting on it…
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:42 AM
great monoku, we all want to make a diffrence.
Lillico  Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:47 AM
Thank you, Eve.
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