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Stone Free

Seeking out the sanctuaries till jaggedness wears; blunt only tumbles harder, to boo nightmarish: it knocks keen etching, grooves which rake… Fleeing sleep, a roused huff real, wheels in its silent war; engages a caged subterfuge: Eloquent is a pebbled stone! (8/15/2020: Inspira: Sanctuary contest & ‘04 Eliminator 30 Daytona, Davis) Stone Free Footnotes: Should I heed the unconscious, or toss? Throw it back to its recess of non-exist Obscure it and blank out an angry emo Not turned, the stone sinks in a cavern Eventually it buries so deep and I, free… Free…; till a flooding dream flashes grief Released, it streams in polish, smoother Eely slippery it slithers easily to the fore Emerging, it shines in its dark: do I flee?

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Date: 8/16/2020 7:25:00 AM
i am glad you were inspired.. Interesting poem...
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 8/16/2020 12:08:00 PM
me too! thank you :)
Date: 8/15/2020 6:29:00 PM
Submerged metaphors are my favorite, enjoyed this poem!
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 8/15/2020 7:52:00 PM
not too sure what submerged metaphors are but I'm glad you enjoyed the read :)

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