Stolen Treat

The monkey was thinking about what he should eat
Until another monkey had stolen his treat

So he thought and thought all day long 
Until Brenna had finally came along

Did she eat it or throw it away
It doesn't matter i'm her friend anyway
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Yarnell Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 4:14 PM
lol very good
Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Christina, "Wish that you were more prolific, because you writing is terrific! Now get out that pen and compose! I want to see more of your work! Carolyn
Moreno Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 3:01 PM
Nicely penned, great job and keep it up...Raul
Mayall Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 11:09 AM
i love it made me laugh good job
Jordan Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 11:31 PM
Christina - wonderful couplet - my favorite form - What a beautiful and sweet ending - God Bless, MJ
Higgins Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 7:06 PM
Nicely done my poetic friend.
Lopez Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 7:10 AM
this reminds me of true friendship ....good job
Neal Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 2:38 PM
Very nice work...This is a good couplet...Love Elizabeth
Devonshire Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 2:18 PM
How clever! Thank you, Carolyn.
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