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Stolen Treat

The monkey was thinking about what he should eat Until another monkey had stolen his treat So he thought and thought all day long Until Brenna had finally came along Did she eat it or throw it away It doesn't matter i'm her friend anyway

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/1/2009 4:14:00 PM
lol very good
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Date: 2/17/2009 7:28:00 PM
Christina, "Wish that you were more prolific, because you writing is terrific! Now get out that pen and compose! I want to see more of your work! Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2009 3:01:00 PM
Nicely penned, great job and keep it up...Raul
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Date: 2/17/2009 11:09:00 AM
i love it made me laugh good job
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Date: 2/13/2009 11:31:00 PM
Christina - wonderful couplet - my favorite form - What a beautiful and sweet ending - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:06:00 PM
Nicely done my poetic friend.
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:10:00 AM
this reminds me of true friendship ....good job
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Date: 2/12/2009 2:38:00 PM
Very nice work...This is a good couplet...Love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/12/2009 2:18:00 PM
How clever! Thank you, Carolyn.
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