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We’re closed neighbors, we cared for each other I trusted you dearly, I was your girl You’re like my father or older brother Your friendship was a gift - a precious pearl Every moment with you was a sunshine We played music, sang… held each other’s hand If I cried, your warm hugs made me feel fine Your words inspired me to grow, to stand One day, you mixed up all stars in my sight, Drew my face close to your tantalized eyes An odd feeling, was it tremble or fright? Stiffen by your stolen kiss, just thrilled thrice So mad with your new surprise, I must sting But you swore to come back with a bondring ©2015Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved Nov. 15, 2015 2.20pm

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Parray Shahid

Date: 12/25/2015 7:59:00 PM

The metre is all over the place. To be honestly pointed out. Nevertheless, the idea is good!

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/20/2015 1:54:00 AM

I SIMPLY LOVE THIS SONNET MY FRIEND. Fiction or not the poem speaks well on reality, love, life changing relationships, etc I hope you will continue to write fine sonnets my friend.A7

Funom Makama

Date: 12/17/2015 4:06:00 AM

lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/19/2015 7:48:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very wonderful and inspiring comment and especially for sharing your precious time to read this humble poem of mine. Have a Very Merry Christmas to you and your family! Many hugs from me my very dear friend, Funom.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2015 6:22:00 PM

WOW, SIS, I had a few of these during this lifetime. Love is the best when every moment counts, a delight to read my sweet sister. Always your best poetic sister, fan and BFF. LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 12/19/2015 6:56:00 AM

Hello, my very precious sister and BFF of mine forever and ever. I can't stop thanking you for your loving visit, your generosity of sharing your ample time to read my latest poems and all your very loving support. I appreciate it soo much from the bottom of my heart. May God's bountiful graces and blessings be back to you my beloved poet sis. I love you so much. Wishing you and your family a very Joyful Christmas Season! Sending my sincerest love, hugs and kisses your way.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/30/2015 2:20:00 AM

Leonora, weeeeeeeeeeeee =`) such funny witty poem and sweet! hehehe but I pray you'll soon have that bondring.. hugs mi amiga.. =`) ~Olive Eloisa

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2015 10:26:00 PM

:)))) I appreciate so much your warm visit my dear amiga. Many hugs to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2015 2:57:00 AM

- Something beautiful that was broken .... sad, dear Leonora - Still a really wonderful sonnet - Hugs and best wishes // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/19/2015 8:17:00 AM

I appreciate so much your kind visit and encouraging comments my dear friend, Anne Lise. Thank you so much. Hugs and kissess back at you.

Elis Artis

Date: 11/17/2015 7:58:00 PM

What a masterpiece. Proves you can create some clever, creative and unique pieces out of sadness. +7 Everything is just perfect, outstanding sonnet!

Len Gasun
Date: 11/19/2015 8:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and encouraging 7 rating and comments my dear friend, Elis. Hugs back at you!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/17/2015 6:20:00 AM

Excellent. Sad but beautiful sonnet. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Len Gasun
Date: 11/17/2015 9:03:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Ravi. Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2015 4:57:00 PM

this is sweet, Leonora. What is a bondring? Do you mean closest of neighbors in that first part? This sounds so romantic. Hope it scores big for you. I enjoyed getting your comment today. TIme passes so swiftly and we lose track of each other!

Len Gasun
Date: 11/17/2015 9:06:00 AM

Hi, my dear friend, Andrea! I just used the term bondring to shorten the words friendship ring, engagement or wedding ring. I thank you more for stopping by. Hugs!

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/15/2015 7:15:00 AM

Hello Leonora, A very compelling Sonnet here. The theme of the trusted relationship, changed and destroyed by the "Stolen Kiss" presents an immediate "about-face" to the reader. (Maybe it's because I write short stories too and will be starting my first novel very soon, I also see this theme from the perspective of a fully-developed story as well.) Regardless, the tenor and progression of your language her describing the change in this relationship says it all. 7 + FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/19/2015 3:28:00 PM

No need at all Leonora to apologize. You can always contact me or come back to me any time you choose. Believe me, I try to answer and stay in touch with everyone I can over the course of each week, but I've got to balance my time to write and all the other stuff. I understand totally!! The important thing for you is to keep writing as you can and make it a fun experience (as much as that may be possible)!! Cheers and Best, Dear One . . . Gary

Len Gasun
Date: 11/19/2015 8:24:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Gary for your kindness and understanding. I'm so sorry, I've broken my promise to come the following day because I've got late important appointment last night and didn't find time anymore to come here when I got back home. God bless you and best wishes always. Just remember I'm one of your fans now and pls. reserve me one of your books. Thank you so much.

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/17/2015 7:44:00 PM

Thanks Leonora!! Have no fears about Writer's Block. Just keep coming back and trying to write whenever you can. It just takes time to find your voice and the confidence and passion to go with it. Believe me, we all need distance and breaks at certain times -- and I can certainly attest to that, especially with all of the stuff I'm involved in. What's happened to me over time is actually the opposite now. I have so many ideas and themes now to write about and can only do a certain number over any given period of time. Best Wishes to your Leonora . . . You are a most lovely person with a beautiful soul!! Gary

Len Gasun
Date: 11/17/2015 9:49:00 AM

Hello my very dear friend, Gary!Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by on my poetry once again. I appreciate it so much alongwith your very encouraging comments, 7 and faving my poem. I hope I can write more like you. Like many others here you're giving me an inspiration to write, one of my great mentors. For now, it seems that I'm having my writers block but hope i'll be ok soon. Tytysssm again my very dear friend. I'll be back tomorrow to read more from you and from the others here coz it's already late at night in my side of the world. I promise, ok? Many hugs to you from me. God bless!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2015 5:23:00 AM

Sad that this happens quiet often all over the world..Enjoyed reading it today..Someday this earth will be populated with people who do the right and not the wrong..Thanks for visiting my poems..Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 11/19/2015 9:26:00 AM

You might be right my very dear friend Sara. Thank you so much for visiting as well and your lovely feedback. I'll visit you again soon. I'm so sorry for not coming yet now coz it's again getting late here. I'll visit you soon, promise. Many hugs to you! God bless.