Maryam Jameela Haniff Poet Rhyme

Stolen Heart

You stole my heart 
I could not see
but I felt it 
inside of me

You stole my heart
you did not think
that yours would part
but I stole it, in return

Something's gone
but something's left
It is your heart 
that I have kept

You stole my heart
so I stole yours
but would I let go
if you let go first?

No, I want your heart
and you want mine
Is this something 
rare to find?

Yes, a heart like yours
is rare to find
I'll take your heart
if you'll keep mine.

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Rhia Madison Thomer May 8, 2009 at 2:54 PM this was beautiful! the emotion was strong and vivid. i really enjoyed this one as well! you are an excellent poet!

Edward Orozco May 7, 2009 at 5:06 PM Beautiful! =)

Debbie Guzzi March 15, 2009 at 2:24 PM You are a very strong woman Maryam! Be carefull with those 2 hearts! Love & Light

Mohammad Yamin March 15, 2009 at 11:39 AM Maryam, This is an enchanting poem beautifully written. Most enjoyable thing is simplicity and purity of thoughts -free of complications. I pay my tribute to you. Thanks also for your eloquent comments on my poem 'Do not Knock'. God Bless You. - Sincerely, Mohammad.

Robin L. Gass March 14, 2009 at 10:38 AM Beautiful poem, Maryam! You've captured the emotions very nicely and I, too, lve the last stanza of this very touching rhyme. Well done! Love, Robin

Belinda Parish March 13, 2009 at 6:56 PM Awe...this is so sweet...I especially like the last stanza...

Catherine Adams March 11, 2009 at 8:43 PM WOW! Extrordinary poem! Thanks for the lovely comment on my featured poem "Life is a Tree." With I being 13 and getting great comments from wonderfull poets like you, means alot to me! Much love, ~Catherine

Carrie Richards March 11, 2009 at 7:37 PM So bittersweet...well done, Maryam.