Stolen

One can never steal the moment. Time's arrow, relatively speaking, runs backward only at speeds greater than light. But there are moments when the world is right if we close our eyes and you take my hand we can try.

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Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 3/3/2015 7:38:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic...Loved it! :) Ana

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/3/2015 9:03:00 PM

Thanks Ana.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/27/2014 10:13:00 AM

A philosophical masterpiece.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 2/12/2014 9:43:00 AM

I like this Roger - moment's come together to make up what matters in our lives. I like how you said 'one can never steal the moment' - this puts the responsibility on how we will react to such a moment on us individually. Well penned.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/14/2014 2:48:00 PM

Vicky, thanks, I' appreciate your comment.