Stirred

STIRRED I had a glad awakening, When life's pool was stirred, By hearing the sweet trilling From a little yellow bird. When life's pool was stirred, A ripple of joy to ponder, From a little yellow bird Singing praises of splendor. A ripple of joy to ponder, This bird was a joy to hear Singing praises of splendor, Brought to my heart good cheer. This bird was a joy to hear It's music became a blessing Brought to my heart good cheer, I had a glad awakening. Copyright © Vivien Wade Feb. 2014

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/17/2017 9:15:00 AM

Hello Vivien, a very nice poem, very good flow, nice rhyme, and love the theme. Yes, it is correct.. if you need help soup mail me... If you go to my page there will be a small letter icon it will take you to soup mail for me. You can go into your settings and turn on you soup mail. ~*

Vivien Wade
Date: 6/17/2017 7:54:00 PM

Thanks Eve I am still learning the computer so some thing I find difficult, but will try as my husband can help, though I bother him too often. I am okay with e-mails. blessings, Vivien

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/16/2017 8:56:00 AM

I happen to like bird poems, Vivien:) I enjoyed this pantoum. Pantoums are such fun:)

Vivien Wade
Date: 6/16/2017 7:05:00 PM

I like birds also. My favorite is the Magpie, with their lovely warble. Have written several on them. In the summer I have 3 that visit me every day, waiting for me to give them a meaty treat. Blessings again, Vivien.