'stirred'

the fountain has run arid
similar to her feelings
infertile until rainfall
stirred concurrently





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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 29, 2011 at 9:20 AM

haha, thanks a lot ;) but I finally entered that velvet sky-- that drippy thing might backfire on me-- lol or hmm maybe I should enter that instead?? lol ok fine I won't not sure if that wuold still classify as haiku ? ok fine...

Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2011 at 12:03 AM

Wilma, I have seen a number of good movies lately but I am too tired to think of their names. Let me know if you want a quick opinion on anything.I see so many! goodnight now. I need to go as fast as I can to my other comments and get my aching back to bed!

Michael J. Falotico

June 24, 2011 at 2:36 PM

Tossing and turning ???? lol just checking... Friday is here!!! love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2011 at 11:27 PM

cool title and concept with that word, dear. You I think are my LAST poet comment for the night. I'm SO worn out. See ya later, alligator.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 22, 2011 at 8:59 PM

I sure do hope the rains bring forth sprouts, Missy :) really like your analogy here :D hugs to you :D

Michael J. Falotico

June 22, 2011 at 2:50 PM

Words that you make dance acroos the screen like no other... make me smile very much.... Long week to hun, June 30th starts my 2 week vacation...miss you luv...always Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

June 22, 2011 at 1:18 PM

Brilliant analogy of the fountain to the feelings in her heart, Wilma. Love needs nourishment to remain alive, just as a fountain needs a supply of water. When love lingers on without nourishment, eventually the emotions are tapped out. You created a terrific dodoitsu, dear. Love, Carolyn