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Stir Of Echoes

Stir of echoes Run through my mind I see them there All the time Where do they come from And why are they there Echoes all around me I try to erase them Echoes out of time They're on repeat All the time Stir of echoes Is what I hear They're getting Closer all the time Stir of echoes Is what I hear The closer I get The more I fear I'm losing my mind!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/26/2017 10:11:00 AM
Hmmm. Very interesting! I know what it means to be distracted and to be triggered by what is happening around. The things we need to do can seem almost impossible when all is not right with our world and ourselves. In hindsight, it helps me to understand what other people are going through today. Thank-you for the memory jog. The past is never that far away when something comes from out of the blue and it's deja vue.
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:15:00 AM
haha, finally seeing your comment to my comment. sorry, I tried but I just can't find a new poem of yours to comment to and I'm in a rush!!! I wish there was a way to know if we had seen all a person's poems!!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/15/2013 2:10:00 AM
Yes me too ;}
Date: 4/22/2013 2:26:00 PM
this reminds me of a lifetime movie I saw about a girl who was hearing voices. She was schizophrenic. They really do believe in the voices. I think if one fears he is losing his mind, that means one is still has control of his faculties. This one is fascinating. Hope it's just you putting yourself into another person's shoes and not really going crazy! (or you may be writing of something else, like memories perhaps?)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/22/2013 3:38:00 PM
you caught me Andrea ;}
Date: 4/21/2013 10:57:00 AM
I like the way you think, and about you losing your mind. I'm hoping this is based on a movie I'd seen.... i love love this poem. Almost felt hypnotized after reading your poem... your newest fan, if you don't mind... love the many different ways you share write... always~ Linda
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/21/2013 12:51:00 PM
Thank you again ;}
Date: 4/21/2013 10:57:00 AM
adding you to my favorite poet list... Linda
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Date: 3/9/2013 9:33:00 AM
Echoes can be very reflective... Nice poem, Debbie... Terry
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/9/2013 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Terry ;}
Date: 1/3/2013 4:12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Memories can be bothersome or good just according to whether they are good or bad..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/10/2013 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Sara ;}
Date: 2/10/2012 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2012 9:37:00 AM
Yeah. It's like a tune that keeps running through your head - sometimes a tune you hate. Robert Schumann had an A-440 running through his head constantly - drove him mad. I can get into the space very well. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/8/2012 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Dave ;} I've always heard echoes from another time,, parallel universe,, aliens ;} deceased family,,, I don't know !
Date: 2/6/2012 11:15:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/6/2012 11:23:00 PM
thank you Sam ;}
Date: 11/14/2010 6:18:00 AM
You have expressed nice thoughts on Stir of Echoes, Debbie
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Date: 11/14/2010 5:13:00 AM
Interesting write on demons and emotions...There was a movie called Stir of echos which wa really good... good write..Michael
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