Keith Bickerstaffe Poet Verse

Stillpoint

The space binding darkness to light,
birthplace of visions where souls 
do not stray in exclusion but congregate 
wearing the mantle of mercy and peace.

Bitter arguments unreconciled, blessings 
never spoken, angry exchanges left wanting
of prompt resolution have no meaning here. 

All torments are quieted, rumors and lies are 
forgiven, love and respect take their hold for those 
children of God who were wandering out in the cold.

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Vince Suzadail Jr. December 28, 2008 at 5:58 PM Is there a stillpoint? Deep write. Makes one wonder. Vince

Donald Meikle December 28, 2008 at 5:50 AM So y've been to North Wales (yer not supposed t'tell) Although you did tell it well lar

Deneen White December 27, 2008 at 5:18 PM hi Keith, this is a powerful and poignant write, take care D-ncye

December 27, 2008 at 3:01 PM Powerful message shared in a creative way. Good use of imagery. I really like the last stanza which leaves the reader with much to ponder. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful New Year! Karen

Nathaniel Köhp December 27, 2008 at 8:49 AM Yet another beautiful poem, Keith! I must admit, I may have to read it several times before I fully understand it, however, I completely respect the presentation and words used. No, respect is not enough! I love them! A wonderful piece which I will definitely read over and over again. Also, thank you for your comment on "Plastic Surgery" it is sad how carried away some people get :( Nathaniel

Robin L. Gass December 27, 2008 at 6:33 AM The words you have penned here are truly a thing of beauty to behold. So many wonderful phrases that ring clear with truth. Forgiveness, mercy, respect. If one possess these then love and peace should follow easily. We all need closure. To heal we need closure and the offenses need to stop. Awesome write Keith. Goes to my faves. GBY. Love Robin

Kristin Reynolds December 27, 2008 at 4:06 AM Yes, truly. This breaks my heart for some reason, and lights it up, as well. amazing poetry Keith, love Kristin

Yoni Dvorkis December 26, 2008 at 10:59 PM Now we're talking! Awesome work.