Stillness Unbroken

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Stillness unbroken, love suffused Vibrant bliss in fullness No longer by ego bemused We’re one with That oneness Aversion and desire Burnt in funeral pyre Bliss aglow, heart afire Clear truth bespoken Stillness unbroken 13-November-2021 Quietus ''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Mark Koplin

Date: 11/20/2021 8:31:00 AM

Nice, congratulations Seeker!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/20/2021 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, Mark!

Constance La France

Date: 11/16/2021 1:52:00 PM

Seeker, wonderful rhyming poem and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems, love your chosen image also ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/16/2021 6:52:00 PM

Thanks for hosting, Constance! Always a delight to participate in your innovative contests!

Deb M

Date: 11/13/2021 6:58:00 AM

Hi Seeker…What a calm peaceful poem….reading it gave me a sense of peace! Lovely. Debx

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/13/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Deb!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/12/2021 11:08:00 PM

The truth will set you free.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/13/2021 7:44:00 AM

How’re you doing Victor?