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Stillness

Stillness of the night,And the dullness in my sight, A cold dark cloudy winter night,The pathway lights shine on bright. Perched comfortably in the balcony of my farm house, The vista so great that the dormant poet in me arouse. The cool breeze envelops my surround, A few dew drops from the moistened leaves drips aground. The languid wing of air the fragrance of it carries, Of blossomed flowers, trees, plants and berries. Once again the freshness in my mind, Seems to be awakening from the blind. Welcome, come in the joys of happiness, Its now time to say to "good bye" to darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/19/2012 12:07:00 PM
Very good couplet with wonderful imagery.If it is for Michael's contest then you have to write your name below it.Thanks for your kind comments at my pages.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/19/2012 12:18:00 PM
thanks Kash, it is for the glistening contest.but thanks again. you are kind hearted to help me in my approach to contests..especially withe name or the name of the contest.....~sashi
Date: 3/18/2012 11:24:00 AM
graceful lines accompany your mood, sashi... tranquil way of bidding farewell by communing with nature.. winning huggs to you over at michael's! :) hugggs!
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/18/2012 12:25:00 PM
thanks Nette
Date: 3/17/2012 8:48:00 AM
Good morning, Sashi, i love the way you started your poem with a far feeling of deepness,, than ended your poem with LIGHT... enjoyed.."HAPPY ST PATRICK DAY TO YOU , GOD BLESS~ ALWAYS PD ;-)
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/17/2012 8:53:00 AM
thank you PD.......it's 8.21 pm now here in goa..........~sashi

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