Stillness

Stillness of the night,And the dullness in my sight, A cold dark cloudy winter night,The pathway lights shine on bright. Perched comfortably in the balcony of my farm house, The vista so great that the dormant poet in me arouse. The cool breeze envelops my surround, A few dew drops from the moistened leaves drips aground. The languid wing of air the fragrance of it carries, Of blossomed flowers, trees, plants and berries. Once again the freshness in my mind, Seems to be awakening from the blind. Welcome, come in the joys of happiness, Its now time to say to "good bye" to darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 19, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Very good couplet with wonderful imagery.If it is for Michael's contest then you have to write your name below it.Thanks for your kind comments at my pages.
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March 19, 2012 at 12:18 PM
thanks Kash, it is for the glistening contest.but thanks again. you are kind hearted to help me in my approach to contests..especially withe name or the name of the contest.....~sashi
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March 18, 2012 at 11:24 AM
graceful lines accompany your mood, sashi... tranquil way of bidding farewell by communing with nature.. winning huggs to you over at michael's! :) hugggs!
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March 18, 2012 at 12:25 PM
thanks Nette
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March 17, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Good morning, Sashi, i love the way you started your poem with a far feeling of deepness,, than ended your poem with LIGHT... enjoyed.."HAPPY ST PATRICK DAY TO YOU , GOD BLESS~ ALWAYS PD ;-)
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March 17, 2012 at 8:53 AM
thank you PD.......it's 8.21 pm now here in goa..........~sashi
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