Stillness

She glides out of the room on tiptoe,
As graceful as a sinuous ballet,
Sliding past sad memories that flow,
Staring, scowling eyes upon her still prey.

As graceful as a sinuous ballet,
Stealthily steadfast, slipping slowly,
Staring, scowling eyes upon her still prey,
She’s ready to strike bloodthirstily.

Stealthily steadfast, slipping slowly,
Marked double-crossing husband might have guessed,
She’s ready to strike bloodthirstily,
As he unwittingly lies down to rest.

Marked double-crossing husband might have guessed,
Slithering snakelike, it’s his scornful wife,                                                                                  
As he unwittingly lies down to rest,
She swoops in silently with sharpened knife.

Like a surgeon’s slash it’s very precise,
Sliding past sad memories that flow,
With bloodied knife in hand, it’s once, twice, thrice,
She glides out of the room on tiptoe.

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Date: 6/2/2022 9:05:00 PM
Excellent write. Your point is sharp!
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Barbara Mcguire Fiore
Date: 9/4/2023 6:05:00 AM
thanks David
Date: 4/8/2022 4:45:00 AM
Mood of revenge without remorse stylishly executed. The tiptoeing verses of the pantoum, add to the bewitchment. Superb!
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Barbara Mcguire Fiore
Date: 9/4/2023 6:06:00 AM
thank you Nimai
Date: 4/7/2022 4:17:00 PM
Wow Barbara! Great poem!
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Barbara Mcguire Fiore
Date: 9/4/2023 6:06:00 AM
It was fun writing! Thanks Jennifer
Date: 4/7/2022 12:56:00 PM
Great expressive wording Barbara, with lovely rhyme and flow too. Have a great day, Gordon
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Barbara Mcguire Fiore
Date: 9/4/2023 6:06:00 AM
All the best Gordon. Thanks
Date: 8/10/2021 5:27:00 AM
Captivating and good story told. Lovely.
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Barbara Mcguire Fiore
Date: 9/4/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thanks Serlina!
Date: 2/28/2021 12:50:00 PM
Wow! Great Rhyming Pantoum , Barbara, love the story. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Barbara Mcguire Fiore
Date: 9/4/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
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