Stillness

She glides out of the room on tiptoe,
As graceful as a sinuous ballet,
Sliding past sad memories that flow,
Staring, scowling eyes upon her still prey.

As graceful as a sinuous ballet,
Stealthily steadfast, slipping slowly,
Staring, scowling eyes upon her still prey,
She’s ready to strike bloodthirstily.

Stealthily steadfast, slipping slowly,
Marked double-crossing husband might have guessed,
She’s ready to strike bloodthirstily,
As he unwittingly lies down to rest.

Marked double-crossing husband might have guessed,
Slithering snakelike, it’s his scornful wife,                                                                                  
As he unwittingly lies down to rest,
She swoops in silently with sharpened knife.

Like a surgeon’s slash it’s very precise,
Sliding past sad memories that flow,
With bloodied knife in hand, it’s once, twice, thrice,
She glides out of the room on tiptoe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Drowley Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 9:05 PM
Excellent write. Your point is sharp!
Mcguire Fiore Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:05 AM
thanks David
Swain Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 4:45 AM
Mood of revenge without remorse stylishly executed. The tiptoeing verses of the pantoum, add to the bewitchment. Superb!
Mcguire Fiore Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:06 AM
thank you Nimai
Fenn Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 4:17 PM
Wow Barbara! Great poem!
Mcguire Fiore Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:06 AM
It was fun writing! Thanks Jennifer
Mcconnell Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 12:56 PM
Great expressive wording Barbara, with lovely rhyme and flow too. Have a great day, Gordon
Mcguire Fiore Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:06 AM
All the best Gordon. Thanks
Rose Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 5:27 AM
Captivating and good story told. Lovely.
Mcguire Fiore Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Thanks Serlina!
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Wow! Great Rhyming Pantoum , Barbara, love the story. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
Mcguire Fiore Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Thank you Eve.
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