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...the birds having nothing on you each tasty morsel drips deflowering of night and day where sun has chose to stay close your lips to mine piercing the aire beheld in Pierian time kindled and caressed in kiss late night hours waved as arousals arrive and reside touches pulsed by rhyme symphonically conduced more than mere interludes that never conclude stillness our tune ignition the flame morning whispers silent into eyes of Jade hesitating, she breathes once more meandering Elysian fields of gold

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Date: 11/18/2019 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful, TS. Bravo on your POTD. Superbly penned.
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Date: 11/18/2019 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Line
Date: 11/3/2019 7:32:00 AM
- A romantic, poem :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., TS :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thank you A-L
Date: 11/3/2019 3:58:00 AM
This is very beautiful and deserving of POTD TS. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 11/3/2019 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Connie
Date: 11/3/2019 3:11:00 AM
Beautiful Poetry TS Poetry, well deserved.
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Date: 11/3/2019 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Arthur
Date: 11/2/2019 9:55:00 PM
Ah congrats TS well deserved;)
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Date: 11/3/2019 2:10:00 AM
Thank you B
Date: 11/2/2019 6:24:00 PM
TS, wonderfully penned poem, congratulations on your deserving POTD honor !
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Date: 11/2/2019 7:03:00 PM
Thank you DH
Date: 11/2/2019 5:22:00 PM
This is so beautiful and romantic, with a tender touch of passion. Congratulations TS Poetry, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/2/2019 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Brandy
Date: 11/2/2019 3:34:00 PM
Spun of golden threads, tapestry of great birth. A feast, a delicious spread. Magnificent display of a true poet s worth. Truly awe inspiring gift to we that seek to read fine poetry. A fav too.
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:24:00 PM
Thank you my good friend, you humble me
Date: 11/2/2019 2:02:00 PM
PT, congratulations on POTD. Hugs
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Evie :)
Date: 11/2/2019 12:53:00 PM
What a romantic beauty!! Loved it. Congrats on your well-deserved POTD. Carole :D
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Duet
Date: 11/2/2019 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/3/2019 3:10:00 AM
He is a great humanistic poet!
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Heidi...hope all is well
Date: 11/2/2019 9:12:00 AM
Awesome poetry TS...Congratulations on POTD ~Charlie
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Charles...I need to grace your pages
Date: 11/2/2019 8:34:00 AM
A very explosive stillness TS...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thank you WW
Date: 11/2/2019 8:27:00 AM
Gorgeous penning TS, congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Momo :))
Date: 11/2/2019 7:13:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, TS! The romantic imagery is so expressive. Great ink work! Kudos on POTD. Love and peace always.
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 11/2/2019 7:02:00 AM
Great one...Congratulations TS On POTD...
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Date: 11/2/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Arturo
Date: 10/31/2019 11:01:00 PM
Beautifully delivered. Regarding ....birds. I dreamed I Moved Among The Elysian Fields. Regards, cattas in columbae
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/3/2019 9:18:00 AM
Most welcome shadow magnet
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/3/2019 7:52:00 AM
hA! Late congrats Herr Collaborator. Lilith
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/1/2019 7:02:00 AM
Romance lives not for the birds
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/1/2019 6:59:00 AM
kind of beats...."wow" or, "as always amazing". but still, not a bad poem of romance. x
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/1/2019 6:56:00 AM
https://www.123helpme.com/analysis-of-i-dreamed-i-moved-among-the-elysian-fields--preview.asp?id=533462
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/1/2019 6:54:00 AM
well, far be it from me to extol the virtues of women standing together ... ah the Wolves, the Wolves...
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/1/2019 6:30:00 AM
Humdinger indeed...thanks L
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/31/2019 11:15:00 PM
the official analysis is a humdinger...
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Date: 10/31/2019 11:01:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/famous/poem/i_dreamed_i_moved_among_the_elysian_fields_16480
Date: 10/31/2019 9:49:00 PM
a...fave...
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/1/2019 6:30:00 AM
Thank you HT
Date: 10/31/2019 9:25:00 PM
Oh what a spell we weave master of the pen. Breathtaking kelli.
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Date: 10/31/2019 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Kelli, spells sent to the right one are enchanting
Date: 10/31/2019 4:28:00 PM
As always T amazing;)
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Date: 10/31/2019 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Brenda

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