Stillness

...the birds having nothing on you each tasty morsel drips deflowering of night and day where sun has chose to stay close your lips to mine piercing the aire beheld in Pierian time kindled and caressed in kiss late night hours waved as arousals arrive and reside touches pulsed by rhyme symphonically conduced more than mere interludes that never conclude stillness our tune ignition the flame morning whispers silent into eyes of Jade hesitating, she breathes once more meandering Elysian fields of gold
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November 18, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Beautiful, TS. Bravo on your POTD. Superbly penned.
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November 18, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Thanks Line
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November 3, 2019 at 7:32 AM
- A romantic, poem :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., TS :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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November 3, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Thank you A-L
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November 3, 2019 at 3:58 AM
This is very beautiful and deserving of POTD TS. Congratulations! xxoo
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November 3, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Connie
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November 3, 2019 at 3:11 AM
Beautiful Poetry TS Poetry, well deserved.
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November 3, 2019 at 6:38 AM
Thank you Arthur
Chiri Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Ah congrats TS well deserved;)
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November 3, 2019 at 2:10 AM
Thank you B
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November 2, 2019 at 6:24 PM
TS, wonderfully penned poem, congratulations on your deserving POTD honor !
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November 2, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Thank you DH
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November 2, 2019 at 5:22 PM
This is so beautiful and romantic, with a tender touch of passion. Congratulations TS Poetry, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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November 2, 2019 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Brandy
Lindley Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Spun of golden threads, tapestry of great birth. A feast, a delicious spread. Magnificent display of a true poet s worth. Truly awe inspiring gift to we that seek to read fine poetry. A fav too.
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November 2, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Thank you my good friend, you humble me
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November 2, 2019 at 2:02 PM
PT, congratulations on POTD. Hugs
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November 2, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Thanks Evie :)
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November 2, 2019 at 12:53 PM
What a romantic beauty!! Loved it. Congrats on your well-deserved POTD. Carole :D
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November 2, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Duet
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November 2, 2019 at 10:10 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
Vaso Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 3:10 AM
He is a great humanistic poet!
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November 2, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Heidi...hope all is well
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November 2, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Awesome poetry TS...Congratulations on POTD ~Charlie
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November 2, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Thanks Charles...I need to grace your pages
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November 2, 2019 at 8:34 AM
A very explosive stillness TS...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...^WW^ :o)
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November 2, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Thank you WW
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November 2, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Gorgeous penning TS, congratulations on POTD! xomo
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November 2, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Thanks Momo :))
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November 2, 2019 at 7:13 AM
Beautiful poetry, TS! The romantic imagery is so expressive. Great ink work! Kudos on POTD. Love and peace always.
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November 2, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Thank you my friend
Michael Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Great one...Congratulations TS On POTD...
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November 2, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Thank you Arturo
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October 31, 2019 at 11:01 PM
Beautifully delivered. Regarding ....birds. I dreamed I Moved Among The Elysian Fields. Regards, cattas in columbae
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November 3, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Most welcome shadow magnet
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November 3, 2019 at 7:52 AM
hA! Late congrats Herr Collaborator. Lilith
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November 1, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Romance lives not for the birds
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November 1, 2019 at 6:59 AM
kind of beats...."wow" or, "as always amazing". but still, not a bad poem of romance. x
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November 1, 2019 at 6:56 AM
https://www.123helpme.com/analysis-of-i-dreamed-i-moved-among-the-elysian-fields--preview.asp?id=533462
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November 1, 2019 at 6:54 AM
well, far be it from me to extol the virtues of women standing together ... ah the Wolves, the Wolves...
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November 1, 2019 at 6:30 AM
Humdinger indeed...thanks L
Labyrinth Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 11:15 PM
the official analysis is a humdinger...
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October 31, 2019 at 11:01 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/famous/poem/i_dreamed_i_moved_among_the_elysian_fields_16480
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October 31, 2019 at 9:49 PM
a...fave...
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November 1, 2019 at 6:30 AM
Thank you HT
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October 31, 2019 at 9:25 PM
Oh what a spell we weave master of the pen. Breathtaking kelli.
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October 31, 2019 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Kelli, spells sent to the right one are enchanting
Chiri Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 4:28 PM
As always T amazing;)
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October 31, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Thank you Brenda
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