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Stilllooking

Lines of blow       Half bottle of whiskey       Sun coming thru     Ripped curtain   Glistening black  hair       Almond skin       Strangers names      Inked                Finally stirring      Black eyes awake      One more time      Orgasmic                        Slipped away        Never look back      Hot windy day      New journey                Goodbye Isabella

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/27/2023 7:51:00 PM

First, I want to say that I really like the way your words caress the page. "Second: Hot windy day - New journey." Sounds like the perfect opportunity to try something new. Keep reaching for the stars. :) Brandy

Richard Ferry
Date: 1/28/2023 3:26:00 PM

Never tap out

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2022 10:18:00 AM

hmmm, not sure how to take that one. Isabella gone forever?

Richard Ferry
Date: 12/27/2022 5:08:00 PM

Just the way it reads Onward to next journey Hope your well