Stilled Time

one moment seems eternal in your absence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolves Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Very relatable. Awesome brevity
Adams Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 5:01 AM
Thank you. When we want time to move it drags when we want to savor a moment it grows wings :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:34 AM
In seven words you can capture and delight this reader.
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 10:10 AM
Thank you so much Caren...i am sure all of us have experienced this a time or two... hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:39 PM
I understand this one for sure... Love it, Love, Gina
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Thank you so much Gina...i think we all can relate to this at some point in life... hugs
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 9:10 PM
Wonderfully expressed, my friend! (Soup mail, please). Cheers, Gershon
Adams Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Thank you so much my friend... :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 1:28 PM
So true--so well said, my friend.
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Sad reality sometimes that you my kind friend :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 12:16 PM
- I feel it these days ... "wrapped in a gray cloud" ... waiting for death ... - Lovely written, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 1:14 PM
So very sorry you have to go through that my sweet friend :( hugs
There Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:47 AM
What impact these few words have on a heart...pretty amazing, my friend.
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:49 AM
thank you so much my friend... hugs
Green Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:06 AM
I know this feeling, felt it yesterday for a while. Hope it passes soon my friend. Amazing writing, short but powerful.
Adams Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:20 AM
guess we all feel it sometimes...my turn today... thank you so much Chris for always being so kind... hugs
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