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Still Waters Run Deep

Ascended spirit, I need your help.
Share with me the knowledge spoken
through a voice actually 
mine, though it speaks kinder
words of honesty
and clarity
that still my
lucid
mind.

dedicationfaithfantasyforgivenesshappinessnonet

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Sara Kendrick

July 18, 2009 at 12:15 PM

I like your Nonet. Very enlightening. Sara By the way the "Bible" is actually about a prophet named Jesus who was God's own son and Jesus said who is without sin or who hasn't done wrong cast the first stone. He was very plain in his teaching like don't try to take a splinter out of your fellowman's eye when you have a beam in your own. I love the enlightenment from the Word of God.

Sara Kendrick

July 8, 2009 at 2:03 PM

This is the first Nonet that I have read. I will have to look it up and see what the form is about. I like what you have written. Sara

Veronica Joseph

July 8, 2009 at 12:54 PM

lucid makes me think calm....well done, always listen for that guiding voice ....

Carolyn Devonshire

June 28, 2009 at 4:21 PM

"Words of honesty and clarity" are always welcome. How beautifully you describe the spiritual impact they have on you. Very nice, Yoni. Love, Carolyn

L'Nass Shango

June 27, 2009 at 9:09 PM

I love this ... what a great show of exuberant faith ... what a beautiful you.

Debbie Guzzi

June 24, 2009 at 2:38 PM

stilling my lucid mind. god within & without HUGS & I sooooooooo glad you're back. I have too much yard work lately! Light & Love

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

June 24, 2009 at 5:43 AM

Yoni, The Spirit must be making the rounds, today. And oh, how good it is when He helps. This was a pleasant surprise after just posting similar sentiments- different style-a bit sad- Same great God - Perhaps a different name- My love goes out to you. Lovingly, Dane