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Still Waters Or Morning Mist

Still waters lie peacefully beneath the restless morning mist  
Both united in composition yet glowing example of separate desire  

The first calm and still, seeking  no more than place of quiet refuge 
The other adrift without care or reason yielding to beckon call of morning sun and wistful wind of passion. Each at peace within their existence and serving example of the lives which surround us. 

Which are you ?
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Delaney Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 2:15 AM
Love this painting of words. I have to say I very easily take turns in both states. Cheers, SuZ
Rose Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Hello ! Thank you for the kind words. Isn’t it interesting that the we are all capable of existing within different states…. All at our own choosing. Darrell
Rolland Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:49 PM
graceful poetry, i love the metaphorical choice you propose between the mist and the still waters , painting is excellent yann
Rose Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement ! It is often interesting to see nature display itself as we walk this path of life. Have a great day ! Darrell
Rolland Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:49 PM
graceful poetry, i love the metaphorical choice you propose between the mist and the still waters , painting is excellent yann
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