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Still Waters

I float with ease On a mystical cloud To sit upon this rock I rest and view Transfixed by you Surrounded by tranquillity I touch the water that reflects your beauty In an aura of magical colours I feel the ripples Run through my soul As I bathe within your water

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/21/2013 3:57:00 PM

Love it ,,, going to favorites ;}

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/22/2013 4:27:00 AM

Thank you Debbie, love Elizabeth :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/18/2012 12:10:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth, Your Wonderful POEMS make me long for my cabin. The Tranquility absorbed into the PEN and set to view. Superb Write LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/18/2012 5:45:00 PM

Thank you Harry, The cabin sounds wonderful, makes me think of log fires, and tranquility, love Elizabeth

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/17/2012 6:20:00 PM

sounds tranquil indeed - JH

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/17/2012 8:13:00 PM

Yes indeed, nothing like a bit of tranquillity, thank you JH, love Elizabeth

Lucas Ongawo

Date: 12/16/2012 12:37:00 PM

calming feeling this poem bring, Elizabeth--Lucas--

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/16/2012 3:28:00 PM

Thank you Lucas, love Elizabeth