Elizabeth O'Driscoll Poet Rhyme

Still Waters

I float with ease
 On a mystical cloud
 To sit upon this rock
 I rest and view
 Transfixed by you
 Surrounded by tranquillity
 I touch the water that reflects your beauty
 In an aura of magical colours
 I feel the ripples
 Run through my soul
 As I bathe within your water

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Debbie Duncan January 21, 2013 at 3:57 PM Love it ,,, going to favorites ;} Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 22, 2013 at 4:27 AM Thank you Debbie, love Elizabeth :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire December 18, 2012 at 12:10 PM Dear Elizabeth, Your Wonderful POEMS make me long for my cabin. The Tranquility absorbed into the PEN and set to view. Superb Write LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 18, 2012 at 5:45 PM Thank you Harry, The cabin sounds wonderful, makes me think of log fires, and tranquility, love Elizabeth

Honestly J.T. December 17, 2012 at 6:20 PM sounds tranquil indeed - JH Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 17, 2012 at 8:13 PM Yes indeed, nothing like a bit of tranquillity, thank you JH, love Elizabeth

Lucas Ongawo December 16, 2012 at 12:37 PM calming feeling this poem bring, Elizabeth--Lucas-- Elizabeth O'Driscoll December 16, 2012 at 3:28 PM Thank you Lucas, love Elizabeth