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Still Unknown

Twisted; you're a mystery Unraveled; turned out a misery Tangled; you're undefinable Deciphered; near yet unreachable Discovered; I love you Ended; I watch you go

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Date: 12/15/2024 8:49:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:38:00 PM
Ma. Fatima Ferrer , nice to read this one again. LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 7:57:00 PM
MA. FATIMA, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 12/27/2013 5:05:00 PM
hello Ma Fatima, Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with the family. Heartfelt poem.... xox..Linda
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Date: 12/16/2013 1:27:00 PM
Yeah love is a mystery. Such a wondrful poem fatima. Pls coment my latest poem too.
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Ma. Fatima Ferrer
Date: 12/16/2013 6:34:00 PM
Thanks for your kind feedback.. :)

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