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Still Trying

still trying
to bench-press
this weight
the debt
my father left me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 16, 2014 at 6:08 PM
LOVE IT, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. LATERZ SUSAN.........Luv ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 3:37 PM
wow, susan. I never saw this before. It's fantastic!!!! congrats, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 3:07 PM
Sad..Way to go with this winning work..Congrats...Sara
Dom Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 11:28 AM
This is a fav for me.And I'm glad Chris confirms this worthy write.
Dom Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 3:57 AM
I am familiar with the gym you workout in. Very neat tanka.
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 2:54 PM
oh, love this clever one. Thanks very much, Susan - loved your contest : )
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 1:49 PM
- Are sorry for your loss, B.E.S. :( - grief will become easier with time - he is always in your heart! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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