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Still Trying

still trying to bench-press this weight the debt my father left me

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Skat A

Date: 4/16/2014 6:08:00 PM

LOVE IT, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. LATERZ SUSAN.........Luv ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2014 3:37:00 PM

wow, susan. I never saw this before. It's fantastic!!!! congrats, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2014 3:07:00 PM

Sad..Way to go with this winning work..Congrats...Sara

Michael Dom

Date: 4/14/2014 11:28:00 AM

This is a fav for me.And I'm glad Chris confirms this worthy write.

Michael Dom

Date: 4/1/2014 3:57:00 AM

I am familiar with the gym you workout in. Very neat tanka.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2014 2:54:00 PM

oh, love this clever one. Thanks very much, Susan - loved your contest : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/30/2014 1:49:00 PM

- Are sorry for your loss, B.E.S. :( - grief will become easier with time - he is always in your heart! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)