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Still the One

Will you marry me?...enamored the deep gaze. Twenty years ago , I mesmerised into your maze. Razzled dazzled life, beleaguered in myriad phase. Pristine peace I found, hugged in your embrace. Those quarrels and niggles, grudge, grin of grumble. Those laurels and giggles, touch within was humble. Annoy of careless throws, those wet towels on bed. I waited for your rose,... that 'wow' you never said. In silence reigned Love, so majestic like kings. I grew strong in your arms, you flew high on my wings. You're still the one...tentacled together. You're still the one...pinnacled forever. The Trust of our old treasure... Our love ?...How do we measure? 15th September 2018. Still The One Poetry Contest Sponsored by Michelle Faulkner (Couplet form)

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Date: 2/20/2020 3:15:00 AM
Congrats on your top win!:)
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Date: 10/10/2018 1:18:00 PM
CONGRATS Debjani. Blessing
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/22/2018 11:49:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your encouragement
Date: 10/5/2018 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Debjani.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/5/2018 8:19:00 AM
thanks for your wishes.
Date: 10/1/2018 2:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/5/2018 8:18:00 AM
thanks for your kind words
Date: 9/30/2018 9:55:00 PM
Your poem is unique and beautiful Debjani. Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 9/30/2018 10:14:00 PM
I am overwhelmed ..thanks Connie for your words of encouragement
Date: 9/30/2018 4:52:00 PM
a lovely tribute Debjani, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 9/30/2018 10:15:00 PM
thanks Jan..for your wishes and kind words
Date: 9/30/2018 3:51:00 PM
This is so profound and touching, especially loved 'I grew strong in your arms, you flew high on my wings,' congratulations and thank you for entering my contest!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 9/30/2018 10:20:00 PM
thanks so much Michelle. .it was such a nice theme. .your applause is indeed a big boost to my spirit
Date: 9/29/2018 5:33:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to the man you love! Twenty years together is a great feat. I am just twelve in marriage.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 9/30/2018 1:28:00 AM
Thanks dear Modupe for liking it. wish you long years of togetherness

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