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Still the One


We married young and ventured on our trail,
   not knowing what our journey would entail
to reach our goals- precarious, or rife,
   together in our rendezvous with life.

As we combined our special pathways planned-
   our winding roads led us to places grand,
and with finesse, we blended our unique
   hopes, heading to a higher mountain peak.

We started, hand in hand, to walk our miles
   with ecstasy or sadness, firm our smiles.
A time for us, together- come what may-
   together, we shall always want to stay.

So many years have passed- we are so blessed
   still on our path- we travel to the crest.
A wedding anniversary just passed;
   for sixty years now, our true love did last.


September 7, 2018

~8th Place~
Contest: Still The One
Sponsor:  Michelle Faulkner
Judged: 09/30/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. There is always a charm in the long journey.
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Yes, for sure, Subimal. Thank you so much for the congrats and nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 10:12 PM
What a beautiful achievement is sixty years Sandra! Your poem expresses that long lasting love so wonderfully! Congratulations on your win and on your anniversary! : )
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, for your congrats on our sixty years, and my poem. I so much appreciate your lovely sentiments. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 4:44 PM
a beautiful testament to your commitment to eachother and many congrats on your diamond anniversary. may you enjoy many more happy years together:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Thank you very much, Jan, for your lovely comment on my poem and congrats on our 60 years and best wishes for the future. Don't know where the years went! But, we are very blessed and thankful for sure. Love and hugs, Sandra
Watson Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 4:26 PM
This was such a wonderful read, Sandra both from the flow and content and the testimony of dedicated love. Congratulations! Wendy
Faulkner Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 3:56 PM
I really like the metaphor that marriage is a long climb together, congratulations on both the contest and your sixty four years together (I have only a measly 13!)
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Thank you, Michelle, for the great contest, for my nice placement, and your congratulations! I am pleased that you found my poem worthy! Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 11:40 AM
A fantastic mile stone Sandra and I wish you many more happy years together. Tom. Good luck.
Haight Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Thank you very much, Tom, for your lovely comment. I really appreciate it. Sandra :)
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