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Still the One

Her first taste of romance was a slow dance in the park
Stars and fireflies joined the moon and pushed away the dark

Things that had been dull before took on a brand new shine
A man she had not known before now became just "mine"

Laughter now came easily a trait she'd never known
Then she lost the inborn need  - the need to be alone

She could see the sunset hues and name them all in turn
Then understand it was love that made the candle burn

Now some forty years have passed when comes the morning sun
She smiles at his wrinkled face and knows he's still the one

9-2-18
For Michelle Faulkner's contest Still The One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Awww I really love your poem Larry and your ending was priceless! Congratulations on your win! : )
Bradfield Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Thank you, Connie. Glad you liked it!
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 4:51 PM
what a touching poem Larry, many congrats on your win:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Thanks, Jan!!
Watson Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 4:24 PM
How beautiful! Congratulations, Larry.
Bradfield Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thank you, Wendy !
Faulkner Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 3:52 PM
Nina is right, I love this, from the start I wanted to put this on the winner's list, especially like 'then understand it was love that made the candle burn,' congratulations and thank you for entering my contest!
Bradfield Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Thank you Michelle! It was a nice choice of words you used for the contest...Brings up all kinds of possibilities.. I enjoyed it!!
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