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Still the One

Her first taste of romance was a slow dance in the park Stars and fireflies joined the moon and pushed away the dark Things that had been dull before took on a brand new shine A man she had not known before now became just "mine" Laughter now came easily a trait she'd never known Then she lost the inborn need - the need to be alone She could see the sunset hues and name them all in turn Then understand it was love that made the candle burn Now some forty years have passed when comes the morning sun She smiles at his wrinkled face and knows he's still the one 9-2-18 For Michelle Faulkner's contest Still The One

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Date: 9/30/2018 10:06:00 PM
Awww I really love your poem Larry and your ending was priceless! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/1/2018 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. Glad you liked it!
Date: 9/30/2018 4:51:00 PM
what a touching poem Larry, many congrats on your win:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/1/2018 2:36:00 PM
Thanks, Jan!!
Date: 9/30/2018 4:24:00 PM
How beautiful! Congratulations, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/1/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy !
Date: 9/30/2018 3:52:00 PM
Nina is right, I love this, from the start I wanted to put this on the winner's list, especially like 'then understand it was love that made the candle burn,' congratulations and thank you for entering my contest!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/1/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Michelle! It was a nice choice of words you used for the contest...Brings up all kinds of possibilities.. I enjoyed it!!

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