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Still Sweet 16 At 18

HS Senior Finals Are you going to the dance? I'd take a chance; say you might give me a call, but you're the know it all; Do you know I write your name and you're to blame if I fail this test I need, but you are all I read; I can see you seeing me, yes I can see, you might think I'm on a string but I'm not anything; I could tell you so much more, but it's a bore, I mean, I mean what I say and wish you'd go away; there's the bell, another chance, we'll never dance, I know what it's all about, but I'm not putting out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/25/2011 7:59:00 AM
What a beautiful day and how wonderful it is to be able to read what was on your mind and in your heart when you wrote this poem Vee. I hope you have a weekend full of new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2011 4:33:00 PM
Lovely string of senryu on a continuous theme, Vee
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