James Horn Poet Limerick

Still Smoking When Last Seen

Still Smoking When Last Seen

He was still smoking when last seen;
Had been having bad habit and a fein;
Smoke filled air,
And hard to bare;
Stopped eating so he could look lean.

Jim Horn

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Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2019 at 10:25 AM Poor health choices. He could end up anorexic and with lung cancer!!! James Horn November 17, 2019 at 6:35 PM Seems like anything you inhale is harmful to you.

Eve Roper November 16, 2019 at 4:33 PM Is that you my friend still smoking cause you look pretty lean in the avatar :) James Horn November 17, 2019 at 6:37 PM My wife and I never have smoked and never will. Both of our parents did though. Back in the 40's smoking was addicting. Still see the guy smoking a Camel and blowing a circle near the empire state building.