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Still Naked

Naked Truth

N~ascent truth resides at the heart of wisdom thus

A~story conjects still naked waits for refutation

T~he emperor’s clothes devoid of the latest chique  

I~ntimately risqué when average normality beckons

V~ie for veracity rescued from the scrap heaps of time

I~n candour modesty disentangles sexy sound bites

T~o be naked or not for whom where how and when

Y-aup those who lie in winning words instead of reason


11th November 2016

Written for contest ‘Naked’ judged 16th November



Still Naked

Naked with no laurels for my glory could I yawp in

Awe of other poets’ winning well versed script though

Kinder to myself and fellow soupers do I give merit

Eject my sulking disappointment from the scene and

Defuse what was as to denude again the naked truth


Expanded on 26th November 2016 for the contest 

‘Take The Dagger From My Heart Please - 3
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Burch Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Kai, thank you for the opportunity to write for your contest... and my laurels!!! Big Hugggs. Deb
Neumann Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 2:13 AM
Thanks Deborah. It was my first contest and sponsoring is actually a lot of fun. Kai
La France Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Kai, congratulations on your placement in my contest, well done ~
Neumann Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Thank you Broken Wings. Many wishes, Kai
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Recognition Kai, and well deserved too. Naked nativity. Congratulations
Neumann Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Thank you Darren. Wishes, Kai
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