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Still Misfire

Once I was considered a real flat tire Now I'm full of air and my tire's on fire Rolling down life's highway Laughing, making hay But at 82, I occasionally still misfire

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/7/2017 8:52:00 AM

ROTFLMAO I am awake now. I have had my morning Ellis. I don't think you could ever stop writing limericks. I see you at the Pearly Gates and St. Peter rolling on the ground laughing 'til he wets himself.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2017 9:48:00 AM

That's the one thing missing in my life... looking so forward to it! Hope he doesn't lose his job if he pees himself though! :( HAVE A SUPER DUPER DAY MISS PATRICIA!!! Love, Jackson xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/7/2017 8:22:00 AM

If you're a flat tire, I'm a retread//(Or, at least I need one on my head)//There you have hair//I only have air//Your coif is gray mine is dead! BACKFIRE ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2017 9:50:00 AM

"I'm a retread" that's not nice JJ! Your lims have me chuckling EVERY day!!! COOL ON JOHN JOHN!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/7/2017 7:22:00 AM

Yes, this one is very funny! You still misfire my friend? I doubt you do that very much though, you are probably in great shape! I really enjoyed this entertaining poem this morning, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/7/2017 7:32:00 AM

"Great shape" YUP! Except for some minor stuff... like on and on and on....