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Still Misfire

Once I was considered a real flat tire
Now I'm full of air and my tire's on fire
Rolling down life's highway
Laughing, making hay
But at 82, I occasionally still misfire

Copyright © Jack Ellison | Year Posted 2018

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March 13, 2018 at 3:20 PM

hahahahaha.... JAck is back.. I mean who was that guy writing those free verses, so intelligent!!!

March 13, 2018 at 3:33 PM

Guess at 82, my occasional misfire can be expected!!! No guarantees though! But aren't you damn well proud of me???

March 13, 2018 at 7:26 AM

I think I may have to agree with Tom's comment on this Jack ...Maria

March 13, 2018 at 8:12 AM

Are you guys ganging up on me??? LOL Love, SLAPPY HAPPY JACK xox

March 13, 2018 at 7:21 AM

you need a full service i think and maybe a de-coke, get that engine of yours purring again.

March 13, 2018 at 8:10 AM

Thanks for the sound advice Sir Thomas!!! I'll get back to you!!!

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