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Still Misfire

Once I was considered a real flat tire Now I'm full of air and my tire's on fire Rolling down life's highway Laughing, making hay But at 82, I occasionally still misfire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/13/2018 3:20:00 PM
hahahahaha.... JAck is back.. I mean who was that guy writing those free verses, so intelligent!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2018 3:33:00 PM
Guess at 82, my occasional misfire can be expected!!! No guarantees though! But aren't you damn well proud of me???
Date: 3/13/2018 7:26:00 AM
I think I may have to agree with Tom's comment on this Jack ...Maria
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2018 8:12:00 AM
Are you guys ganging up on me??? LOL Love, SLAPPY HAPPY JACK xox
Date: 3/13/2018 7:21:00 AM
you need a full service i think and maybe a de-coke, get that engine of yours purring again.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thanks for the sound advice Sir Thomas!!! I'll get back to you!!!

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