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Still In the Loop

Woof, woof!!! What a fantastic new day! First day of the rest of our lives, life's ballet Happy as poop Still in the loop Ignore the woofs, I'm really human some say

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/2/2017 11:04:00 AM

*giggles* galore! xomo ;)

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/2/2017 11:21:00 AM

"Giggles Galore"... used to know a girl by that name!!! xojack xxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/2/2017 11:09:00 AM

YUP!!! I'm a youman bean!!! HAPPY DAY MISS MO!!! Love, Jack xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/2/2017 8:49:00 AM

A tad loopy but what the heck?//More of a fireball than a train wreck.//A crocodile rocker//a volatile shocker//Girlies love Jackson a hug and a peck. LOOP ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/2/2017 8:56:00 AM

That's Woof Woof, not Wulf Wulf though iy could be used in a pinch!!! LOVE THOSE GIRLIES... YUP!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/2/2017 6:50:00 AM

You're human? Glad to know this, I didn't want to be applying comments to a bird! I loved this poem, again with the poo...gotta have a least one per day huh? Really enjoyed this piece this morning! Such a divine poem, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/2/2017 6:58:00 AM

A poop a day keeps the doctors away!!! LOL