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Still In My Mind

The shore seemed a bit different, now not like that, when We used to come. Sea didn't allure my eyes, Water didn't soothe my mind, The sand wasn't that relaxing. Closed my eyes, curious to know the reason! Tried to hold her hands, Realized I was alone right there.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/17/2024 6:21:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2023 1:04:00 AM

Creative lines penned. Way to go. Sara

Kashyap Raina
Date: 7/20/2023 5:23:00 AM

Glad you liked it!