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Still In Love

Are you now happy with him by your side?
Are you just playing happy just to move on?
Is the past sadness for your smiles to hide?
Or for his sun to end our past dawn?

Why? I ask myself why?
You loved me and I loved you more than just thrice,
Yet in the end you showed me that all was a mere lie
And killed me with your sad surprise.

You said, "Goodbye dear love, here's my love's last kiss. . "
Stabbed my heart and left me to bleed,
Like longing for you and your warm kiss
To ease this pain 'cause it's still you that I need.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sabido Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Thankx jimmy and riley..
Anderson Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 8:23 AM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
Righting Riley - Shauna Riley Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 7:14 AM
i really like this poem....worded very well...
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